Writing an Erotic Short Story

WARNING: THIS BLOG IS RATED 18+ This blog is to document the journey a husband and wife go through while writing an erotic short story together. To get the full benefit from this blog you will need to read it in order of date.

Friday, April 21, 2006

Getting into the swing of things (by Liz)

Okay I know it has been a few days since I wrote anything to the story, but that doesn't mean nothing has been going on behind the scenes! Anyway, I have written a bit more today and feel I'm getting more into the groove, but you can be the judge of that I guess. Shaun continues to write chapters further on down the line, and I think when this is all finished he will have written about 90% of the story. Oh well I just hope my part doesn't suck too much, or maybe I have to
put more sucking in it.. there's a thought! Read and enjoy.

“You must learn to think before you speak,” was all Freja said. She then continued to look him over as if nothing had happened. Charles bit his tongue and decided just to look straight ahead, very conscience of his now burning buttocks. Prodding Charles in the stomach with the end of her whip she remarked, “you’re quite out of shape for a man of your age, aren’t you?” Charles didn’t know if it was a rhetorical question or not, so he decided just to keep his mouth shut. “I bet you couldn’t fuck for more than five minutes without needing a rest,” she continued. Once again Charles felt his face fill with colour. “I can hold my own,” he said indignantly. Freja drew close to Charles’ front so that her very erect nipples brushed gently against his chest. She grasped his chin in her hand and said in a quiet but firm voice, “ By the time I’m finished with you my dear boy, you’ll be able to fuck ten women in one night and satisfy them all.”

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